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Writing

Intermediate Spanish 2, Spring 2018

Persuasive essay

"La importancia de cuidar a la salud mental" was the final compositional assignment in my first Spanish class at Drake. I have included this artifact as an early example of my writing skills as well as an example of a persuasive essay. Many of my later writing assignments are are analytical; however, the format of this assignment provided the foundations for me to craft stronger central arguments in my papers. Also unlike my later writing, this paper is very short. I chose to include this artifact to show that my writing skills have always been much stronger than my speaking skills. Although it is a basic paper, organization and varied vocabulary in this sample are evident. My Spanish writing today is strengthened by more variation in transitions and sentence structure, as well as improved reading skills which allow me to consider more technical texts as evidence. This is evidenced by the following writing samples which demonstrate significant growth in my writing in length and complexity. 

Practical Speaking and Writing, Fall 2018

Primary and secondary research based essay

The above essay was the final project in Spanish Practical Speaking and Writing. It involved interviewing people living in Spanish speaking countries and supplementing this information with secondary research. This is an example of my ability to interpret information given to me in qualitative interviews and supplement it with additional research. Where this writing sample could improved is in moving beyond a statement of fact and analyzing the implications of the findings. I was limited in this sample by my still developing ability to express complex ideas in written form. I included this artifact to show how my writing skills improved from the previous sample. I am able to simply write more than I was able to in the past. I show signs of being able to organize and present original thoughts, but I was not yet at a level where I felt confident in my writing skills to express those ideas. A lot of the writing style here is very basic, as a result of lack of comfort with variations in transitions and other grammatical constructs. 

 

The following sample shows another clear jump in my writing skills. In the sample from Practical Speaking and Writing, I am using repetitive vocabulary and and basic grammatical constructions. After this point in my coursework, I began to recognize how using my full range of subject appropriate vocabulary strengthened my writing. Today, I make a point of editing my written compositions to include stronger vocabulary and different sentence styles to maintain the reader's interest, much like I would in any English paper.

Spanish Film, Memory and Society Spring 2019

Film analysis 

This artifact is an analysis of the film "Motorcycle Diaries." This essay demonstrates how I am able to present an argument concisely and how I can organize my thoughts in a strong manner. I am proud of the way that I chose to structure this essay. I progress my analysis with the changes that occur chronologically in the film I think that it shows that I am capable of keeping my own writing style in my Spanish compositions. It also helps me to write about the entire film and consider the whole body of work in my analysis within a few short pages. I distinctly remember my writing editing process for this paper, which I think is also significant in considering my ability to improve over one semester. I began this paper with an outline in Spanish, unlike I had done in any other composition. This helped me to organize my thoughts and consider each piece of information presented in the analysis. Finally, when I thought I was done with the essay, I went through each sentence and checked every subject and verb for agreement, changed the way I wrote sentences, and solidified my thoughts by making sure every example had sufficient analysis. I believe the work that I put into this essay shows in the final version. 

Latin American Legends, Fall 2019

Legend archetype analysis 

Jumping forward another semester, this essay shows my progression in a number of writing related skills. Throughout the semester that I wrote this paper, I worked on using transitions to improve the flow and clarity of my writing. My progress in using varied transitions and using transitional phrases when appropriate is shown in this writing sample. I believe that my writing in this sample was strengthened by improving on transitional words which aided in the organization of my thoughts. This paper flows and each idea is connected in a much stronger way than any of my prior writing samples. Furthermore, this essay shows that I can formally create and present an analysis of complicated written texts to form a strong argument. This essay is not a simple presentation of facts. I worked to make sure that I could express my own conclusions which came from the reading of many academic texts. 

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